Research Question: What were the Xhosa people famous for?
Thesis: The Xhosa were mostly known for a thing called the Cattle Kill, the Cattle Kill was were there was a little girl who had a vision that if they killed off all their crops and cattle that they would be free and get their land back, but that wasn’t true and it lead to starvation and around 40,000 people died and the survivors were forced to flee and become slaves.
- Topic Sentence #1: They had to kill everything. Like crops. And cattle.
- Topic Sentence #2: The girl’s vision wasn’t real. It lead to starvation. And death.
- Topic Sentence #3: There were some survivors. But they were forced to flee. And work for white people.
Works Cited
About The Xhosa Language. SA-V, SA-Venues.com, sa-venues.com. Accessed 10 Apr. 2019.
Century-old land title has kept the Xhosa together. Southern Eye, 14 Mar. 2014,. Accessed 10 Apr. 2019.
Famous truths about the Xhosa tribe. Buzz South Africa, Buzzsouthafrica, . Accessed 5 Apr. 2019.
Get a little Xhosa. Peterson Toscano, 10 Jan. 2009, Accessed 10 Apr. 2019.
Language Culture And Beliefs. South African History Online, 26 June 2018,. Accessed 10 Apr. 2019.
Latest dresses. Reny styles, 6 Sept. 2018, Accessed 10 Apr. 2019.
Maasai girls from Kenya attend the Eunoto ceremony. African Holocaust, African Holocaust, 18 Apr. 2015, Accessed 4 Apr. 2019.
Recovering Boys. Daily Mail, 30 June 2013,. Accessed 10 Apr. 2019.
Seminar on women identities in Xhosa societies. Johannesburg Institute For Advanced Study, Jiasjobu, 20 May 2017, Accessed 10 Apr. 2019.
Xhosa tradition. Buzz South Africa, Buzzsouthafrica, b. Accessed 5 Apr. 2019.
Xhosa Tribal Dancing. trip advisor, Trip Advisor, Oct. 2017, Accessed 10 Apr. 2019.
Your voice was clear and I didn’t hear back round noise. But your voices volume was different and that really stood out to me, but otherwise I think you video is great, good pictures, and a great choice of music.
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thank you for your feedback
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I really enjoyed the images and transitions in your video. I would suggest making the music a bit quieter though because it made you hard to understand.
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ok thank you I am not that good with that type of thing but I will try to get better
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Your video was enlightening and enjoyable to watch and listen to. You stated all of your topics in an organized manner which made your video strong and professional. Your bibliography looks great as well, but your writing beneath your video needs to be editing a bit. Your writing is organized but has grammar and mechanics mistakes that take away from the overall post. I wouldn’t start your sentences with a conjunction and I would lengthen your topic sentences. That being said I really valued the effort put into your post!
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ok thank you I will work on that.
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I really liked the music in the background! At 0:44 in your sentence in the video uses there instead of their. Overall, it was fun to watch!
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Oh ok I don’t look out for those things but I will start to think of that
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All of your information on your video is really good but the music doesn’t quite fit the mood because it’s so fun and your story is kind of sad.
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Ok thank you for the imput
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I find it quite incredible how the thoughts of a young child impacted a large amount of people in such a powerful way. I really appreciate hearing the history behind the fame of the Xhosa people but would love if you went a little more in depth. You claimed that “There were some survivors. But they were force to flee.” Did anyone predict that destroying the land would impact the Xhosa people in a negative way? This seems like a very interesting topic to research and I would love to learn more about the Xhosa people and their fame.
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Ok thank you I will do that next time
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